How did you use new media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation?

How did you use new media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation? on Prezi

What have you learned from audience feedback?

There was a four second white screen during the video. This was a fault of updating the video to ‘YouTube’. All what was mentioned was that the last voiceover audition was chosen for our final clip.

Magazine- The original magazine was criticised harshly. It had parts of the conventions missing, such as no barcode or dateline. The audience picked up on this and help us realise how précised we have to be with the creations for them to pass as industry standards.

They hated the colour scheme saying that it was to random. This led us to research into realistic already used colour schemes from existing soap opera magazines.

The cover lines were too small and hard to read for customers. We enlarged all cover lines as a result.

The 45p tag looks tacky. It destroys the look of the magazine. So we acted upon this and tidied it up helping keep the impression/mood of the cover.

               The audience did like the cutting out of all the characters. Saying they looked brilliant. They also liked how easy the title was to read.  They say the storylines presented through the cover lines were good and fitted with soap operas. Finally, the left third looked good and would play a crucial part in advertisement.

Poster- The original poster was criticised equally as harshly. It had one convention missing. The poster had no slogan. Slogans are important to make the soap seem witty and appealing. They usually also suggest to the audience what type of soap the poster advertised or possible plots.

The title was hard to read and the audience asked for a clearer version.

The channel four logo brakes copy right rules so we decided to create our own channel logo.

Some of the characters are out of the frame. This focused our attention on making the poster looks neat and tidy.

The soap doesn’t seem very rural. This was a planned however. We want to make the rural soap seem fresh and young which is brought around with the arrival of Rachel Manning’s. This idea is better shown in future drafts.

Could you add a soap logo? As a group we decided not to add a soap logo as it seemed out of place for the mood we were creating. This dismissal breaks no conventions of soap opera posters.

                The audience did like the details shown through each character, their facial expressions and body expression suggest what type of characters they were and the audience noted this. They also looked the use of decorative, for example, the frame holding the poster together.

Magazine- The original magazine was criticised harshly. It had parts of the conventions missing, such as no barcode or dateline. The audience picked up on this and help us realise how précised we have to be with the creations for them to pass as industry standards.

They hated the colour scheme saying that it was to random. This led us to research into realistic already used colour schemes from existing soap opera magazines.

The cover lines were too small and hard to read for customers. We enlarged all cover lines as a result.

The 45p tag looks tacky. It destroys the look of the magazine. So we acted upon this and tidied it up helping keep the impression/mood of the cover.

               The audience did like the cutting out of all the characters. Saying they looked brilliant. They also liked how easy the title was to read.  They say the storylines presented through the cover lines were good and fitted with soap operas. Finally, the left third looked good and would play a crucial part in advertisement.

Poster- The original poster was criticised equally as harshly. It had one convention missing. The poster had no slogan. Slogans are important to make the soap seem witty and appealing. They usually also suggest to the audience what type of soap the poster advertised or possible plots.

The title was hard to read and the audience asked for a clearer version.

The channel four logo brakes copy right rules so we decided to create our own channel logo.

Some of the characters are out of the frame. This focused our attention on making the poster looks neat and tidy.

The soap doesn’t seem very rural. This was a planned however. We want to make the rural soap seem fresh and young which is brought around with the arrival of Rachel Manning’s. This idea is better shown in future drafts.

Could you add a soap logo? As a group we decided not to add a soap logo as it seemed out of place for the mood we were creating. This dismissal breaks no conventions of soap opera posters.

                The audience did like the details shown through each character, their facial expressions and body expression suggest what type of characters they were and the audience noted this. They also looked the use of decorative, for example, the frame holding the poster together.

Poster- This second draft was more of an experiment. We wanted to see if fewer characters looked better. This would be ideal because it would be easier to arrange the layout of the poster because there would be an empty room. Audience feedback taught us that the poster looked bare and boring. So we acknowledge that we needed to add all the characters into the poster both so the audience can be introduced to them and also to look aesthetically pleasing.

Magazine- This is the second draft for our poster. The audience preferred the larger font and it was truer to conventions because the page was busy and packed with images.

None the less, the colour scheme was awful and was moving further away from conventions. We address these problems with our final draft.

Poster- The above image is our final poster. We have adopted the audience feedback and have applied the suggestions to our piece.

Firstly, we kept the poster busy. The audience didn’t like the spaced out second draft and I agree. So we have all the character in a line. By having them spread across the frame it appears busy.

Secondly, we kept the background white. By keeping the background white we didn’t have to deal with the issue of characters being out of proportion with the background.

The audience seemed confused about the message of our poster and the imagery that goes along side it. The title ‘Out with the old in with the Essex’ didn’t match the image of the second draft. Rachel Mannings was not the centre of attention as she was positioned to a side of the frame. To help her stand out we added an effect to the background characters called ‘Sepia’ which made the other characters look old fashioned. We wanted to connote Rachel was bringing a new grove to ‘Mill Lane’ so we positioned her in the front of the poster in the photos original colour. This made it clear to the audience what the main introductory story of ‘Mill Lane’ was and begun the narrative of our soap plot.

The font of the ‘Essex’ also helped connote the idea that Rachel is bringing a new mood to the residence of ‘Mill Lane’. The ‘Mill Lane’ title kept the old fashioned colouring you would expect on a frame plaque. This helped juxtaposition the slogan and showed to all potential audiences that the show isn’t just for the younger generations.

We used audience feedback to see how satisfied our audience was with our final drafts. The black lines are where I crossed out un-helpful messages. These messages were usually from audience members knowing one of the actors and became excitable, commenting in a friendly rather than a productive manner. This is just the first page of feedback. It is impossible to include all the feedback as it is being updated continuously.

The first comment was written by ‘Meg Walsh’, ‘Charley looks badass!’. Firstly, Charley is the actress for ‘Rachel Mannings’, Rachel is the girl in the centre of the frame in colour. The reason her looking ‘badass’ is fantastic is that we want her to seem rebellious, destroying ‘Mill Lanes’ peaceful community.

‘Lee Dyer’ didn’t like the plain background. However, others preferred it and it was easier to create a poster with a black background. This is an example of how you can’t cater for everyone but instead adjust your work to cater for the majority of the audience.

The most reinsuring post was noted by ‘Chris Guyart’. He said ‘The story line your advertising is really clear. It’s obvious Charley comes from Essex and is ruing the piece in Mill Lane.’ This proved that the connotations we wanted to express was noted, spotted and obvious.

Magazine- Our final magazine also incorporated all audience feedback and it is noticeable. Mainly, to address all suggestions and issues we followed conventions or magazine listing covers. This included the colour scheme, title, font and all aspects such as barcodes, dates and price tag.

We used audience feedback to see how satisfied our audience was with our final drafts. The black lines are where I crossed out un-helpful messages. These messages were usually from audience members knowing one of the actors and became excitable, commenting in a friendly rather than a productive manner. This is just the first page of feedback. It is impossible to include all the feedback as it is being updated continuously.

‘Molly Adkins’ said ‘I actually thought that was a real magazine.’.

‘Jack Ogles’ said ‘That is amazing! It looks so real’.

 ‘Matt Bonner’, loves how the pictures overlap and how the colours fit together. ‘It looks very slick!’.

‘Cath O’brian’ says ‘That looks amazing! Like a real magazine!’

All the above comments prove that following the conventions of a magazines cover has made our magazine much more appealing to all audiences.

Who did we interview?

After we completed our trailer we had to interview a wide range of people to get an accurate indication of opinions regarding our trailer. The main seven representations of media are gender, age, sexuality, disability, ethnicity, nationality and social class. So we targeted audience to give feedback who could cover all these areas of representation.

Representation feedback	Participant/s	Occupation	Feedback
Gender	A wide range of Males and Females.	A wide range of all demographic grouping jobs.	Both genders noticed that Rachel Manning’s was the eye candy of the soap and was represented as a ‘diva’. She holds the power over the other members from the cast which is connoted when Ryan Parker ignores his potential partner to stare at Rachel.
Age	Mainly focusing on interviewing young adults and teenagers but I also used two elderly citizens who are retired.	A wide range of demographic grouping jobs.	It was the younger audiences’ who found the soap opera more appealing. Elderly audiences could unpick all encoded information and decode as the producer intended but found the soap to be ‘too active’ for them to enjoy (not appealing to older audiences due to the lack of peacefulness which could be thought of as realistic verisimilitude).
Sexuality	Unnamed.	I asked three homosexual males with a variety of age and jobs to tell me their opinions of our soap opera trailers representation of Marcus Brooker (Marcus is a homosexual). I asked no homosexual females because I do not know any.	All boys found the representation to be unrealistic. Marcus is seen reading a makeup magazine and all boys found this to be stereotypical of television. They did however agree that Marcus Brooker storyline with his father, Barry Brooker, was realistic to life and conveyed half of a correct representation.
Disability	Tanya Borrow	Tanya is my Auntie who suffers from marfan’s syndrome and other mental handicaps. She enjoys watching soap operas and watches all of the mainstream ones show on television.	Tanya cannot be articulate with her words so her feedback was hard to unravel. From the conversation I had with her I could tell that she acknowledge that Rachel Manning’s was disturbing Mill Lane. All other enigma coded information was dismissed by Tanya but she enjoyed the work.
Ethnicity/Nationality	A selection of ethnic males and females.	A wide range of demographic grouping jobs.	Our only ethnic actress in our small cast plays the character Jennifer Ward. Her storyline portrays a negative stereotype, Jennifer cheats on her husband. However, the feedback from audiences’ revealed that no interviewees were offended. Instead, felt that it was okay to categorize a character as negative because if we did not we would be highlighting fears offending, making Jennifer seem perfect, which is racist in itself. Jennifer later gets seen as a protagonist so the stereotype levels out to convey a fair representation.
Social class	All candidates	A variety varying from librarians, business men, mechanics, unemployed, cleaners and many more covering all demographic groupings excluding demographic grouping A.	Our soap doesn’t show a huge range of social class. In a rural area the majority of citizens are of the working class having similar, agricultural jobs. So this representation is fair and conveys accurate verisimilitude. Audiences didn’t find this small demographic grouping as negative and weren’t put of watching the soap even if characters didn’t have classes’ representative of them.

How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?

The purpose of the above clip was to inform you, the reader, of all the similarities between all three types of advertisement. Each presents the same storylines and furthers your understanding of each through several separate methods. For example, Rachel Mannings plot is shown in three separate stages. Firstly, the magazine shows that she has begun a love triangle and that she is ‘trouble’. Secondly, the poster informs us that Rachel is not a normal resident of the rural ‘Mill Lane’, but instead urban ‘Essex’. Lastly, the trailer shows she is not liked but any of the residence habiting ‘Mill Lane’ and that she is fracturing a relatively peaceful society. All three brought together informs the viewer about Rachel position in the soap opera and it is this three way partnerships that links all advertisement products.

Each piece of advertisement conveys the same message of the location for ‘Mill Lane’; a rural, old fashioned village. Once again, similar to the advertisement of stories, we used each form of advertisement to convey a new element to the overall message.  The poster has no background but shows all characters in an old, fashioned brown which resembles that of early photographs. This connotes the location of ‘Mill Lane’ is old. The ‘Mill Lane’ font is also old fashioned compared to the above slogan which furthers the connotation that ‘Mill Lane’ is old fashioned. The magazine shows the background behind the images and shows some characters dressed rurally. This matches the trailers enigma coded information and combining the three the audience figures out the location is an old, rural village. 

Lastly, apart from the magazine which I explained in the above video, all products advertise the element which allows the viewer to watch the soap opera including time, date and channel.

In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

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The above page shows just a small fraction of similar conventions of our trailer. The reason our trailer follows conventions is because we are advertising a story to premier the show. By advertising and presenting ‘Rachel Manning’s’ we have to follow already existing examples of soap opera trailers as they also introduce characters.

The location of our soap is also convention, many soap operas, such as ‘Emmerdale’ are set in rural locations. Yet, we broke the convention of the audience we’re targeting. Most rural soaps advertise a more mature audience but through younger characters we are targeting a broader range of younger and elderly males and females. This gives us a stronger chance of having a successful soap opera.

 Most soap opera trailers are also set in a time period. Our soap trailer breaks this convention, as it shows an entire day and has no set period. This was done so the audience could get a rough idea what a day (or an episode) in ‘Mill Lane’ would be like.

Our trailer follows trailer convention regarding editing. We used fade to blacks which separate the scenes/clips from the soap. This is an effective way to introduce each character within their own scenes.

Finally, to help pursued this younger audience to watch our soap we had a young, upbeat high tempo instrument background music which connotes this isn’t the ordinary rural soap opera. This, in turn, broke the conventions of a soap opera trailer as many of them will use lyrics to imply and suggest a narrative. We choose not to have lyrics as we wanted the storylines to be visually delivered.

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